Kia Ora! My name is Maddison and I am a year 7 at Yaldhurst Model School.
I think that this picture you drew is really cool but maybe show some more detail about it? I like how you also showed the picture you have based your amazing drawing about next to it!
How long did it take?
This reminds me of some of the reading activities that we do over here at YMS. We always have a couple of drawing activities have you done many things like this before? if you have you should share some more!
I think to improve this you could write more about it and why you made this drawing and why you chose it about boats? do you like boats? if you do then why? I think that you could add in more labels like you did in the corner.
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison and I am a year 7 at Yaldhurst Model School.
I think that this picture you drew is really cool but maybe show some more detail about it? I like how you also showed the picture you have based your amazing drawing about next to it!
How long did it take?
This reminds me of some of the reading activities that we do over here at YMS. We always have a couple of drawing activities have you done many things like this before? if you have you should share some more!
I think to improve this you could write more about it and why you made this drawing and why you chose it about boats? do you like boats? if you do then why? I think that you could add in more labels like you did in the corner.
Thanks!
Maddie.